There are undulations in the field
this morning – craters,
and further along
large fissure-like wounds
have opened up,
caused by who knows what.
Subsidence – someone offers.
Tremor – says another.
Love – mutters a stranger,
only love can cause
such devastation.
[first posted 29 May 2014]
Another Way of Saying 
10 responses to “Craters”
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I like that last observer! Must be a poet. =)
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Or someone with heartache – perhaps the same thing. Thanks for your comment.
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Oh wow…this is so very good. You say so much with a few words. The audio adds to it also.
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Thanks so much – audio inspired by you – thought I’d give it a try.
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That made me smile …
It adds meaning to it because of the inflections in your voice
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Thank you – it helps to give a better indication of rhythm – fun doing it too!
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hearing your voice is wonderful! it makes it so much more personal. Amazing piece
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Such a lovely comment to receive – thanks so much for your kind words.
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